I LOVE IT!
So mysterious, the background alone symbolizes rei's character, and the crimson
red theme under the moonlight!
I just love the idea toonleap!
The only minor suggestions I have would be to try and make the city photo
alittle more angled, rather than having it just as a straight row of town
houses. The city bg just looks very plain as it contrasts the rei scan heavily,
seeing as how shes at an angle. I just think it would look more appealing.
Another thing is the random floating gadget you have beside rei's left arm, i
think you should just take it off.
The overall wall looks really nice. Looking forward to seeing more walls as
creative as this from you
Very well done job ^^
Takahiro Kimura also does the conceptual character designs for code geass
hangyaku no lelouch, and I love his illustrations and work for it. It's very
different from what he usually does, but i think he's improved alot.
lol still.... gotta miss his old styles, love the illustration
Very nicely coloured. I laso love the lineart. The overall result gives an
exellent summer feel to it, and I really love the character. Soo pretty with her
dress and her hair caught up with the wind, a great job!
VERY beautiful
Your shading is very accurate, but it still retains it realism and depth in the
characters.
The clothes are also just as good, with the accurate lighting and
everything
LOVE IT!
Asuka with a sexy racing suit man! Very nice work! Though there could be some
depth in the lips, she looks exellent!
I would love to see the original scan if you have it
Wow! I love the shading, and the monochrome colouring gives it a real nice
impression. I love the designs as well, the flower shapes with the swirls, very
fantasy like, also calming. Its a great doujinshi!, hope to see more from you!
Very Nice! She looks so adorable
Your lines are always clean, its a really good sketch. I love the uniform, and
the hair is really cute too!
Cant wait to see more from you!
Its really nice, but you should put some hands on her
Love the eyes, and the face just looks so cute, and the clothes are really nice.
Your lines are also great, smooth and clean, its a really nice sketch!
I love it! Really love the eyes! Now all you just need is to just improve on
alittle bit of proportions. Love the clothing and the face, its all great and
very cute. It looks just so adorable!
You should also add more description to what you did for your sketches, all of
us are quite curious about some of your sketches, like what you used,
inspiration and such. Its a really nice sketch, and I'm even more anxious to see
more of your sketches!
It's probably the arms and hands that just bother me, though you should practise
by drawing as much as you can, as many perspectives as you can.
Everything else looks nice!
Touka Gettan! Its so beautiful
Love Asako Nishida, she preserves Carnelian's art style so well and beautifully,
and
I LOVE CANRELIAN!
Thanks for the scan
So beautiful! love how you did the sunset, and the vectors look really nice, with
the wings and sky, and the overall layout is very effective and works well with
the colours and vectors. Great Job!
The doujinshi is really nice, i love the window setting with the sunset and
laying down, it really creates a sad theme. I also love the colourings with the
sunset, and it certainly does portray a story with the bracelet. Really like
this one!
This is great! Its so pretty with the red and the hair. The Clothings and the
sword look really nice, and i love the positions.
A really beautiful doujinshi!
Wow, this is great! The shadings of the pencil and proportions of the body are
akk real beautiful, and this is done on A3 paper. You've done a fabulous job on
it!
Nice Kimmy77, some proportion problems just needing some touching up to do, but
its really nice and innocent, but powerful. The linework on the sketch is clean
as always, and it has a very fantasy like theme that makes it very nice!
Very nice D-gray-man doujinshi, and don't worry, we don't mind if it's
d-gray-man.
Love the linework in the doujinshi, and i also love the splatter effect with the
blood, its very really realistic, and its good you had fun with it without
making the mess.
I also love the white space as Earl and then the detailed allen, defeated, it
really stands out the defeat. what i also love is the linework on kanda, and his
detailed and nice hair, he still looks cool so you don't have to worry about him
.
And don't worry, its not odd sketching in the middle of the night.
The inking is very good, and even though theres space for improvement, you're
certainly improving, so don't worry. Its a grade A doujinshi
I LOVE IT!
So mysterious, the background alone symbolizes rei's character, and the crimson red theme under the moonlight!
I just love the idea toonleap!
The only minor suggestions I have would be to try and make the city photo alittle more angled, rather than having it just as a straight row of town houses. The city bg just looks very plain as it contrasts the rei scan heavily, seeing as how shes at an angle. I just think it would look more appealing. Another thing is the random floating gadget you have beside rei's left arm, i think you should just take it off.
The overall wall looks really nice. Looking forward to seeing more walls as creative as this from you
Very well done job ^^
Takahiro Kimura also does the conceptual character designs for code geass hangyaku no lelouch, and I love his illustrations and work for it. It's very different from what he usually does, but i think he's improved alot.
lol still.... gotta miss his old styles, love the illustration
Very nicely coloured. I laso love the lineart. The overall result gives an exellent summer feel to it, and I really love the character. Soo pretty with her dress and her hair caught up with the wind, a great job!
Wow, Its great, and it was even done a while ago. Lots of great detail, and i love the shading. Hope we see more ^^
VERY beautiful
Your shading is very accurate, but it still retains it realism and depth in the characters.
The clothes are also just as good, with the accurate lighting and everything
An Exellent job on the shading aspect of it
LOVE IT!
Asuka with a sexy racing suit man! Very nice work! Though there could be some depth in the lips, she looks exellent!
I would love to see the original scan if you have it
Very Nice wall, Fits kotomi's character so well. Love the monochrome theme, and the layout works very well!
Wow! I love the shading, and the monochrome colouring gives it a real nice impression. I love the designs as well, the flower shapes with the swirls, very fantasy like, also calming. Its a great doujinshi!, hope to see more from you!
So cute! Love your chibis! hope we see more of them
Very Nice! She looks so adorable
Your lines are always clean, its a really good sketch. I love the uniform, and the hair is really cute too!
Cant wait to see more from you!
Its really nice, but you should put some hands on her
Love the eyes, and the face just looks so cute, and the clothes are really nice. Your lines are also great, smooth and clean, its a really nice sketch!
I love it! Really love the eyes! Now all you just need is to just improve on alittle bit of proportions. Love the clothing and the face, its all great and very cute. It looks just so adorable!
You should also add more description to what you did for your sketches, all of us are quite curious about some of your sketches, like what you used, inspiration and such. Its a really nice sketch, and I'm even more anxious to see more of your sketches!
It's probably the arms and hands that just bother me, though you should practise by drawing as much as you can, as many perspectives as you can.
Everything else looks nice!
Damn thats a beautiful cg. Love it alot, very professional looking, and cute as well, you have some skill thats for sure!
Beautiful man! Love the overall layout and colors. The girls looks beautiful as well
Touka Gettan! Its so beautiful
Love Asako Nishida, she preserves Carnelian's art style so well and beautifully, and
I LOVE CANRELIAN!
Thanks for the scan
So beautiful!
love how you did the sunset, and the vectors look really nice, with
the wings and sky, and the overall layout is very effective and works well with
the colours and vectors. Great Job!
The doujinshi is really nice, i love the window setting with the sunset and laying down, it really creates a sad theme. I also love the colourings with the sunset, and it certainly does portray a story with the bracelet. Really like this one!
This is great! Its so pretty with the red and the hair. The Clothings and the sword look really nice, and i love the positions.
A really beautiful doujinshi!
AWWWW MISA! Looks really great! Love the shadings and the cute face! Love the detail as well, its really nice!
Wow, this is great! The shadings of the pencil and proportions of the body are akk real beautiful, and this is done on A3 paper. You've done a fabulous job on it!
WOW, looks like the real scan! Very impressive ikari8904, its almost like its been perfected!
Nice Kimmy77, some proportion problems just needing some touching up to do, but its really nice and innocent, but powerful. The linework on the sketch is clean as always, and it has a very fantasy like theme that makes it very nice!
Very nice D-gray-man doujinshi, and don't worry, we don't mind if it's d-gray-man.
.
Love the linework in the doujinshi, and i also love the splatter effect with the blood, its very really realistic, and its good you had fun with it without making the mess.
I also love the white space as Earl and then the detailed allen, defeated, it really stands out the defeat. what i also love is the linework on kanda, and his detailed and nice hair, he still looks cool so you don't have to worry about him
And don't worry, its not odd sketching in the middle of the night.
The inking is very good, and even though theres space for improvement, you're certainly improving, so don't worry. Its a grade A doujinshi